Introduction(Description of storyline, characters, etc.)
Thesis(Mrs. Noyes would have made a better Captain of the ark then Noah)
Reason (He didn't care about the animals he was carrying in the ark)
Example( His animal killing rituals)
Example( Mottyl's fear of him for past experiances)
Reason (His paranoia of pirates.)
Example(When he kills the whales)
Example(When he missidentifies his own family as pirates)
Reason( His abuse of power)
Example( The killing of Lotte)
Example( TBD)
Conclusion( So as you can see..., sum it all up)
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Ben, this is fairly good but only demonstrates one side of the argument. You've shown why Noah is not a good captain but not why Mrs. Noyes would make a better one.
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